A Midwinter Sacrifice. A Short Story by J.F. Penn
A Midwinter Sacrifice. A Short Story by J.F. Penn
A Midwinter Sacrifice. A Short Story by J.F. Penn

A Midwinter Sacrifice. A Short Story

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When the ancient spring runs dry beneath the streets of Bath, the goddess Sulis awakens—and she's thirsty for blood.

Evan came to Bath with nothing but his guitar and a voice that could make strangers weep. Busking in the Christmas market should have been easy money—festive crowds, generous spirits, mulled wine warming the winter air. But when two thugs destroy his livelihood and leave him bleeding in an alley, Evan discovers that some debts can only be paid in sacrifice.

Beneath the cheerful chaos of Bath's Christmas market, an ancient darkness stirs. The Roman baths aren't just tourist attractions—they're sacred ground, where for thousands of years, desperate souls have left curse tablets for the goddess of the spring. And tonight, Sulis Minerva is listening.

A Dark Fantasy Tale of Celtic Mythology and Revenge

A Midwinter Sacrifice plunges readers into the shadowy intersection of modern Britain and ancient pagan power. J.F. Penn weaves a Gothic tapestry of Celtic lore, Roman history, and contemporary urban fantasy, set against the atmospheric backdrop of Bath's UNESCO World Heritage sites.

This isn't your typical Christmas story. It's a tale where shopping centers sit atop sacred springs, where carved angels claw down cathedral walls, and where the old gods never truly died—they only slept, waiting for the right offering to wake them.



Perfect for Readers Who Love:

  • Neil Gaiman's urban fantasy and gods-among-us mythology (American Gods, Neverwhere)
  • MR Carey's dark supernatural thrillers
  • British Gothic horror with historical depth
  • Celtic and Roman mythology reimagined for modern times
  • Atmospheric stories set in ancient, haunted places
  • Christmas tales with teeth—think Krampus meets sacred horror

Themes & Content: Set in the historic city of Bath, England, this dark fantasy short story explores themes of desperation, revenge, ancient worship, and the price of calling upon forgotten gods. The narrative draws on authentic Roman curse tablet traditions, Celtic mythology, and the real history of the Sulis Minerva temple complex.

Readers will experience the collision of Christmas commercialism with pagan sacrifice, the beauty and brutality of busking life, and the terrifying allure of ancient powers that still pulse beneath Britain's stones.

About the Setting: Bath is a city layered with history—Georgian architecture built over Roman ruins built over Celtic sacred sites. The natural hot springs have been worshipped for over 2,000 years, and thousands of real curse tablets have been recovered from the waters, preserved in lead and filled with prayers for justice, revenge, and retribution.

Story Details:

Genre: Dark fantasy, Gothic horror, urban fantasy

Length: Short story (approximately 5,000 words)

Reading time: 20-30 minutes

Mood: Atmospheric, dark, haunting

Setting: Bath, England (contemporary)

Content note: Contains violence and dark themes

Experience visceral storytelling that blends archaeological authenticity with supernatural dread. Where Christmas lights can't keep out the darkness, and ancient goddesses still demand their due.

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Reviews

★★★★★

"Splendid. Definitely a reason to put Bath on your travel itinerary. Is it evil that flows beneath the ancient cobbles of Bath or a necessary life force that keeps the status quo? This one would have shocked Austen and delighted Shelley."

PJ
5 star Amazon review
★★★★★

"Enjoyed this short gem. It’s the perfect antidote to hearing the endless Christmas carols on repeat. Excellent setting in Bath, England. Felt like I was there."

CKWindyCity
5 star Amazon review
★★★★★

"An excellent haunting Christmas tale in the tradition of M. R. James. Frightening fun with a dash of history and mystical lore as well."

Kenneth Scott Culpepper
5 star Amazon review
★★★★★

"The way the story developed took me completely by surprise and the ending is one that will stay with me for a long time. I can't write any more without spoilers. Just be sure to read on to the author's note for a behind the scenes view of how the story came to be."

Clare
5 star Amazon review

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Debbie H
Great Book

This is a chilling short story set in the ancient city of Bath during the winter solstice. The tale follows Evan, a struggling busker who hopes to earn enough money during the Christmas market for a warm meal and shelter. However, after a violent robbery leaves him destitute, he inadvertently awakens an ancient evil tied to the Celtic goddess Sulis. Lured into the dark depths beneath the city by a mysterious woman, Evan faces a terrifying choice as the goddess demands a blood sacrifice to revive her cursed waters. This story masterfully blends folklore, history, and the supernatural, creating a haunting atmosphere.

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Patrick Thompson
sICK!

This story about human sacrifice is sick. And it's like from a sick mind. But that's why I love it. Keep it coming.

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Roberto Gonzalez
A dark delight for a winter night.

Short and not so sweet, this little gem will please JF Penn fans and anyone looking for an introduction to her world of thrills and magic. Go for it!

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Kathryn
Slightly macabre - just how I like them!

I enjoyed this short read (although I'm not a huge fan of short stories normally) as it was written in such a compellingly visual way, with a macabre twist in best short story fashion

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Carol Brown
OMG!!!

OMG... What a story!!! My cat jumped off the bed when I yelled when reaching the last paragraph. Luck of the Irish? Yeah, right!!!

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Cavey
Slightly macabre - just how I like them!

I enjoyed this short read (although I'm not a huge fan of short stories normally) as it was written in such a compellingly visual way, with a macabre twist in best short story fashion

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Wendy Scott Multi-Award Winning Author
Short story

A well-written dark Xmas story.

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Scott Christman
Best author ever!!

I love they way she writes and this is no exception. Trying to do the right thing sometimes doesn’t pay off and vengeance can be bad decision. A quick read that I just couldn’t put down. J.F. Penn is one of my favorite authors.

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William P. Cokas
One of the quickest ways to unsettle you during the holidays

I woke up early this morning and couldn't get back to sleep. Then I remembered I had just downloaded this story on my Kindle. Well, there was no sleeping after that. All I can say is, watch your step the next time you visit Bath.

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Ian Acheson
Good quick romp down into a mystical underworld

A very short story set in Penn's hometown of Bath, England. It reflects the mood of the world in some ways which I liked and has Penn's usual dollop of darkness and mystical with a surprising end.

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D. J. Archer-girard
A simple yet compelling short story

A simple yet compelling short story - in this age of Covid-19, it reminds us how quickly things can go from bad to worst.

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Mjm
Excellent!!

This is a well-written short story which grabbed my attention at once and kept me riveted right through the surprise ending. Perfect for reading in an office waiting room.

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Cheryl Rae
Wonderful!

This was a rich tapestry woven by an afternoon of connection to music and what is right and wrong with this world. Really beautiful I wish it was a full length story …will it be?

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Kindle Customer
Good quick dark Christmas read

For a short story, this was a good read. I would like to see it expanded into a larger story.

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BAS
Hooked!

From the moment I read the first sentence, I was hooked. The author has a knack for making your imagination create the scene whilst entwining her own plot. Although not a genre I normally read, I found this short story a great introduction to what I could be missing. Thank you for the introduction!